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Sorry for the boring title.. I was blank

But here is the dress I made for my exam project at school!
I am very proud of this dress! I know there are some mistakes, but I'm very satisfied with the result!

Model: :iconoonekoedoo:
Photographer: :iconmaloumagnificent:
Image size
2712x3864px 3.97 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5000
Shutter Speed
10/3200 second
Aperture
F/9.0
Focal Length
40 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jun 15, 2012, 12:22:20 PM
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello, I thought I'd might as well drop off a critique. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

First off I would like to say that the model is very gorgeous, but I think the pose looks a bit uncomfortable and unnatural. The way the legs are placed seems a little forced, especially because they are tilting in different direction - since we can't see the thighs positions because of the dress, it looks a bit weird.

I also think that although the background is really beautiful and fits the title, the light doesn't look good on the model. The model becomes sort of "dark" while the background stands out more. I think it would look better if the model was more in the light and stood out more.

I should also all that it's a very lovely dress and it suits you and your haircolour very well. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/> I'm unsure if it was the dress or the photograph you wanted a critique on, so sorry if this is completely wrong.